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I was about to comment and say how shameful it is that you don't have a single comment up here and what is wrong with people, not giving you credit for such an amazing story, but then I realized this is a new story.

Well, you did a fantastic job. I love how well you write. It really made me hang onto every word I read. And this story, real or not, reminds me of me and my Dom and the things that we do. (Except for the ass licking, you kind of lost me there, but it's such a good story that I kept reading, and it didn't disappoint.)

would love to write a denial story with you :)