All Comments on 'A Second Chance Ch. 01'

looks promising, please keep going. THANK YOU

A good start, I am hope for a happy ending . Please keep it a ch02 happy

ending. It does not need all the drama some tales have. maybe he can save her from harm.

Edit! Goodbye isn't hyphenated and when you say "I'm going to?", it's "I'm going TOO?". Those are just a few.

If he and Susan were together 19 years; she's been dead for nearly three; they met in college and Kelly is 15; it makes no sense that he is only 35. So how old is he?

I like the storyline it starting to look like a true romance story. Thanks for sharing.

As someone already pointed out, you've got Matt far too young. Your math doesn't work out. If he and Susan met in college, let's say at the age of 18, and were together for 19 years, then they were 37 when she died. Matt would be 39 or 40, not 35.

This looks good. Realistic, sensitive, emotional, loving. I'd die to have a daughter like her. This chapter was a good setup. I'm looking for a love story that has some good sex to remind me what it used to be like. God, I'm 61 and this is where I find my kicks? God help me. This has better be good.

Da Gopher

Well written. Look forward to reading more.