All Comments on 'A Second Chance Ch. 01'

i loved it i cant wait to read the next part hope you get it done soon...

really enjoyed it. cannot wait to see where it goes. i kinda hope she ends up with Jane.

The story shows promise but you should really have an editor go over the spellings, grammar, etc. So now, let the tale develop and people will love it.

im already wanting the n ext part or parts. this im sure will be a box office success, or if you like an awesome brilliant story.

i cant tell. so a second chance is all you need to be a winner.

It started out good, and you honestly have the right flow for the story. However, your grammar and spelling leave a lot to be desired. With a quick job at editing and more in depth of a few characters you have a really good story, and really good stories do not need sex in it. I think this one is by far more interested than any orgy fest! GOOD JOB!

I READ YOUR STORY AND LOVE! IT LIKE TO SEE MORE. GOOD LUCK!!

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I absolutely loved the story it was something I could relate to with the whole not being out dilemma, but watch your grammar it was kind of confusing to read at first but still great story line

You have a good base to this story. You need to edit it a bit more. Tighten it up and let it flow. Watch for capitol letters and autocorrect mistakes. I did enjoy your writing. Keep it up!😀