by RjThoughts
A sweet connection between a somewhat damaged young man and his zaftig secret admirer.
No need for the question of what comes next?, as this piece is only about the beginning.
Very well done! ~ 5+
Where is chapter two and the rest of the story?
Where is chapter two and the rest of the story?
I like your story nice simple and well written although I'm one to like stories more when it takes a little more time for them to have sex. I encourage you to keep writing you're doing great!
Love the idea of the secret admirer! Can't wait to read the rest of your stories.
I saw your comment about the Anon comment on the thread, I've only read it briefly but I noticed your change of tense a few times in the first few paragraphs. There's also a fair bit of extraneous info in there, which had my attention drifting. Some good descriptions elsewhere though. Good luck. (Delete this if you want.)