All Comments on 'A Secretive Afternoon'

I loved the story -- perhaps some more build up, a little more detail. Sounds like Lori and Mark hae a good thing going - how about another installment.

I agree with Anon, needs more buildup and better detail.

just like i told you, your story struck a nerve of realism for me, describe the sex more though,(quivering breasts, sucking sex sounds, etc). loved it.

Very sensual, made me very wet. Makes me want to have a "special"lover too KATIE in NEW JERSEY