All Comments on 'A Seduction Ch. 01'

LOVE this enchantingly erotically crafted art - PLEASE create more!

I love this! Maybe I love it so much because I am an older man (43) in Iowa

Such a super hot start, please write the rest of this story as soon as You can.

akk....just when it was going to get good...ya leave us hanging....would love to hear more of these adventures

While this story is good reading, it does not offer enough to give you the highest mark. If you want a high mark for it, we need to see some one-on-one action. Perhaps the continuations will include that, and I hope that maybe she has forgotten her ovulating periods and in the course of the action she accidently gets those little tadpoles in her belly to make it grow?

This was a great beginning, but I would have liked it a little more with some kind of interaction between Chad and Keira. Anyways, can't wait for the next part.

~Doll

You can't just leave us hanging like that! This is a wonderful story, and you've left your readers filled with anticipation...

Write very quickly! :)

~Sky~

Now finish and don't let your readers hanging!! lol Can't wait for the next chapter!

Your story is off to a good start, but annoying in ending so short. No one wants to get into a story barely a page long that ends up going nowhere. I would have rated your story much higher, but you can't leave people hanging like that with no substance.

where is the rest of it????

What was the point? You start off going and then nothing! Why would I bother reading your next, too short submission?

Great start but it needs an ending - hopefully we'll see it soon.

Like others before me, my plea is for more. Please continue this fine beginning.

I like the way you write. It naturally pulls you into the story and the characters... at least it pulled me into the story. I want to read more of your writing. Continue with the detail of the characters feelings and thoughts. Very nice. I caught myself getting a little excited. Thank you.

and u stopped it at the right spot,,,leave us hanging!! can't wait for ch2!! already marked it as a fav!

Sounds like it is either the fantasy of a real schoolgirl or someone who wishes she had stepped up and jut gone for it.

so far this is not leading to anything

But I do like the story very much, just hoping the next chapter is a little more conclusive.