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HankWTullamoreHankWTullamorealmost 7 years ago
Too short

One scene does not make a chapter.

Good scene, character of lt d veloping well, but with chapters this short you are going to have trouble keeping interest.

chytownchytown11 months ago

***Pt 01 good start. Thanks

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