All Comments on 'A Sex Shop Surprise'

by shelley23

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sl_davesl_daveover 14 years ago
Very nice

Lovely story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Buy a grammar book . . .

preferably one with terrific chapters on sentence structure and punctuation! Your story is nice and has potential to be good, but I got lost in the long, run-on sentences. Keep writing. You have a good imagination.

shemar45

paullankypaullankyover 4 years ago

Fabulous erotic sensual writing

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