All Comments on 'A Shocking Instant Ch. 01'

Thank you for reading my first submission to Literotica. I’m trying something unique and hope that this super-short format will be fun to write and fun to read. I invite all comments and desires for this story. I suspect as it evolves it will become more detached from reality, but only time will tell! Please, submit your vote but your comments are the most helpful.

But, I like the set up.

Thanks and I look forward to the rest of the story