All Comments on 'A Short Walk on the Longest Night'

Hi, here from the ND contest. This was short, well written, and to the point, with no beating around the bush. Of course since Emily was bare and in a nice grassy patch... ;-)

Seriously, very sexy tale that has nice opportunities for a continuation if you wish. Great job and good luck in the contest.

I loved your idea tremendously, dear Emily. Have tried dreamig myself into the role of The Forest, and I am beginning to like it

Having done something very similar to your story, Many Times Actually, I understand your fantasy. Even if I'm a guy.