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"A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 03:" - Nothing having significantly has changed since my original reading of this unusual concocted story and voting process. Anyway, the voting ended sometime ago (today being October 31, 2023); weird that today is Halloween (in the Good Ole' USA). Onward to Chapter 04.

I've read some bullshit but this is real bullshit!

Okay, I had to drop you from 5s to a 3 this time.

If Benjamin and Kaitlin pause long enough to think, then they will realize that they aren't marooned. For all practical purposes they have been kidnapped and held hostage. Kaitlin already realized that they are under surveillance and being watched because of the emergency first aid kit that was delivered.

The whole setup and premise of the outsiders (probably Joanne and her brother) trying to reprogram the siblings just flew out the window. This isn’t a survival story anymore. The whole idea of being watched and observed like lab rats is creepy as hell. 3/5

Enjoying the story, thanks.

A NOTE for future reference:

I'm an Aussie.

We have most of the deadliest snakes in the world so we have to understand the bastards.

Snakes do NOT 'hunt' or attack people unless they are cornered, grabbed, stepped on/sat on or are otherwise given absolutely no choice.

People are not snake food. They have no reason to strike you except strictly in defence.

They'd rather lie in a warm place and not be bugged by you or anyone else.

If you are a girl snake they may wanna fuck you...

Otherwise they're probably scared of you and want to be left the hell alone.

Keep going , I am enjoying the story.

B

The voting for the transitional chapters of this story is completed. However, I want to add a few comments pertaining to the pleasure I've gotten from this story so far.

Without fail, I'm an incest "junkie" which I am not making the remark as derogatory nor demeaning. Any type incest genre is my pleasure, as with many readers, but I am particularly fond of brother/sister and father/daughter. The writer/author has piqued the senses and imaginations of every reader to this point. I can imagine thousands of scenarios with life-long love, caring and familial (with children) situations.

As with the vast majority of other readers, I'm beyond pleasured with the presentation thus far. I cannot imagine the writer will venture from the obvious pattern that has been developed to this point--brother and sister incestuous, consummating sibling love to the nth degree--and the direction for future chapters.

As a footnote, the comments of several readers have issues with "Anonymous" comments. I feel every person should use an identity, though false, when commenting. Just saying!

Nice story and very erotic as you described how Ben reacted to his sister's words and from what he could see; that his sister was wet and horny for his big cock. That she jerked him off and had no problem doing it and seeing a huge cum load too. How she described her hot body, her big tits and nipples and how wet her pussy was; etc. Yes, we need more ---- thanks :)

Rhabdophis keelback snakes are both venomous and poisonous

There are exactly zero poisonous snakes in the world.

Snakes are venomous, not poisonous.

Please Google the difference.

Choice b lol

The story is rolling good!

How long before Ben gets to fuck Kaitlin?

I need a good fucking between the two of them.

With this comment the voting has now ended, the results are as following:

60 votes for choice A

49 votes for choice B

Close call this time, but A is the winner after all. Don't worry it won't go straight to fucking right away, I like gentle buildups.

Thank you all again for voting and participating with the story, it's nice to see different outcomes with every new chapter!

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it should be B....

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You are a talented writer and either choice will get this loving couple together I believe! Make it happen!

EITHER WAY I KNOW IT WILL BE DYNAMIC, LOVING, HOT AND SEXY! I LOVE YOUR STORIES. FRESH! I WOULD PREFER B. IT'S USUALLY THE WOMAN THAT'S ALL FUCKED UP IN THE HEAD AFTER AN INCESTUOUS GATHERING AS WOMEN ARE FUCKED UP IN THE HEAD AS A GENERAL SENSE, lol NO OFFENSE. I'VE KNOWN ENOUGH WOMEN AND TALKED WITH THEM TO KNOW. THANK YOU FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY!

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A.

Ben can repay the favor in her sleep and let it remain his secret.

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I say b it would bring a more robust story plot I think

A A A A A AAAAAASS

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Plz choose a

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my vote is B

a is still rape untill she is fully awake.

I go with A. She is already dreaming about him, so it would make things even better for her. Also it will help get them closer to what they both want.

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I would like thIs story to be drawn out.

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I say B, he needs rest anyway. Also, pay closer attention to your writing. Good stories sometimes are ruined with sloppy writing.

A or B, just make it a good one.

Anonymous-E

Return the favor.

choice b i want a long storyline

A for sure

A - but not actual fucking until she is fully awake and expressing her agreement.

A is awesome but doesn’t go along with the characters personalities however b is almost too much. either one is great

I think B would be more in keeping with their characters shown so far. Each are a little scared to express themselves.

A. For sure!

I too will go with "A". But gently, exploring, lovingly....

I think he should pleasure her subtly adding physical context to her dream to blend reality and fantasy

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A for me.

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It has to be b. She distanced herself from him when she realized her true feelings she needs to come to terms with her feelings 1st. If he starts something it could blow up

Only because it's gonna be as obviously

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B let them both be fully conscious and aware

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B because A would rush things and B would leave it to a discussion and Progress the story more

I vote option A

I vote B they need to talk first and let each other know how they feel

Option A sounds best.

Option A. It's the only way they will get off this island and live as a couple with Mom and Dad's obvious approval (since Mom probably was the author of the diary). This story needs to follow their life together to the end.

I vote A

Go with option "B", I think building the anticipation a bit more works for this story. Plus as much as she wants it she could react badly to in the light of day as it were. Not that I have anything against option "A".

B. Let it play out. But he really needs her to tell hi, why she became so distant

A

Let go with B

I think B they should both be awake for it. I look forward to you updates to this story truely amazing.

Option A after she begs him in her sleep

B

and just for the record, dinner has 2 n's (just trying to help, not criticize)

Let her enjoy it.

B

Let them enjoy their time alone

Keep the tension building a while longer!