by EenViezeVent
He should wiend up pleasuring her, but it should be after waking her up with a kiss that leads to more.
As usual you have done fantastic work and regardless of how the vote goes we know you will make it perfect.
Thank you for your work,
Tanhors and family.
Definitely choice A. You've built up the story quite well. Can't wait for more chapters
Well it's only fair that one returns a favour and this time is no exception. After all she is having such a nice dream about him it would be a shame to wake up and come up "empty handed".
Putting the lovely relationship aside for a moment I am very curious to find out what the mastermind behind all this planing with them and just who he/she is. One totally crazy idea would be their parents, don't ask me why since I got this idea during a shower :)
A novel idea as it were.
Weirdly fun. Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté
definitely A so she can wake up to a nice pussy licking. Loving this story and where it is going so far.
You should make this like those old goosebumps stories. Where the reader can pick a b or c and then has to flip to chapter 2b or whatever. You basically write down all chapters each and every reader can personally decide where to go. Those used to be fun. Like some paths will end the story quick while other paths would make it go on longer with different endings but everyone got to enjoy it differently. Would be cool but hard to write out.
B is fine with me but it should be in the next section as he's better now
B and remember that I waited almost 3 weeks for this chapter and I am not that patient. Anyways great story.
Let them enjoy their time alone
B
and just for the record, dinner has 2 n's (just trying to help, not criticize)
I think B they should both be awake for it. I look forward to you updates to this story truely amazing.
B. Let it play out. But he really needs her to tell hi, why she became so distant
Go with option "B", I think building the anticipation a bit more works for this story. Plus as much as she wants it she could react badly to in the light of day as it were. Not that I have anything against option "A".
Option A. It's the only way they will get off this island and live as a couple with Mom and Dad's obvious approval (since Mom probably was the author of the diary). This story needs to follow their life together to the end.
I vote B they need to talk first and let each other know how they feel
B because A would rush things and B would leave it to a discussion and Progress the story more
It has to be b. She distanced herself from him when she realized her true feelings she needs to come to terms with her feelings 1st. If he starts something it could blow up
I think he should pleasure her subtly adding physical context to her dream to blend reality and fantasy
I think B would be more in keeping with their characters shown so far. Each are a little scared to express themselves.
A is awesome but doesn’t go along with the characters personalities however b is almost too much. either one is great
A - but not actual fucking until she is fully awake and expressing her agreement.
I say B, he needs rest anyway. Also, pay closer attention to your writing. Good stories sometimes are ruined with sloppy writing.
I go with A. She is already dreaming about him, so it would make things even better for her. Also it will help get them closer to what they both want.
A.
Ben can repay the favor in her sleep and let it remain his secret.
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EITHER WAY I KNOW IT WILL BE DYNAMIC, LOVING, HOT AND SEXY! I LOVE YOUR STORIES. FRESH! I WOULD PREFER B. IT'S USUALLY THE WOMAN THAT'S ALL FUCKED UP IN THE HEAD AFTER AN INCESTUOUS GATHERING AS WOMEN ARE FUCKED UP IN THE HEAD AS A GENERAL SENSE, lol NO OFFENSE. I'VE KNOWN ENOUGH WOMEN AND TALKED WITH THEM TO KNOW. THANK YOU FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY!
You are a talented writer and either choice will get this loving couple together I believe! Make it happen!