All Comments on 'A Sibling Trist'

Often I comment about too much buildup and not enough action, but in your case all I say is Huh? This guy just walks into his sister's room in the middle of the night with no buildup, fondles her, says nothing, etc...? Come on, who is going to believe that? Go back and give us some "foreplay" and reason to believe this is even possibly real.

Exactly what he said

no build up, no forplay, no real story.She just let her brother play with her,,it must have happened before.

1/10 for taking the time to turn your pc on.

As others have already commented, there are huge holes in your story and a spelling error in the title. The word is tryst, not trist (unless you are British)

This reads as if it were just carved out of a longer story, because it lacks so many pieces. Perhaps you may benefit from reading the many submissions here on how to construct an erotic story.

well you have the sex thing down, now lets get the story to go with it. looking forward to your next one to include a Great story to go with the Great sex

I did like the story and the lack of a too wordy buildup - got right to it. Sometimes this is great!! Hope the author writes more!!!

Dutchflyer

Trist... gimme a break!!! It's spelled TrYst... Geeze

why would anyone ever have sex JUST ONCE with a sibling a stranger maybe because you probably will never see them again but a sibling you see at every get together and it will just eat at you and them so why even bother if it is only just one time it is just stupid

DBRS

I WAS IN YHE NAVY ON LEAVE THERE WAS NO WERE FOR ME TO SLEEP MY YOUNG SISTER SAID I COULD SLEEP WITH HER SHE WAS IN BED IN THE NUDE WHEN I GOT TO BED WE FUCK ALL NIGHT NOTHING WAS SAID NEXT DAY SAME THING EVERY NIGHT FOR TWO WEEKS I AM LOOKING TO MY NEXT LEAVE65