All Comments on 'A Sim Sex Life Ch. 01'

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quiverclawquiverclawabout 13 years ago
I agree with RedJohnny...

definitely need to work on the typos. As for the story, very interesting idea! Looking forward to the next chapters.

ADRIANEVERETTADRIANEVERETTabout 13 years ago
Good Story so far

The Sims Digital Game Realm is ripe for XXX Rated Adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

excellent piece of work - the whole shifting into the sim world is very intriguing but I personally dont think it should be that easy? maybe make it more difficult as time goes on?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
wow

love this story, on of the best i think. i think you might start a new wave of sim related storys. the sims is just ripe for the picking. mabey he can go into other games aswell...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great concept! Great story! Keep them coming. I want to hear more. One minor negative

I hate to add a negative, but you could use a proofreader just to eliminate the typos.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I Like It So Far

I'm really surprised this is the first virtual reality story I've stumbled upon so far. I really like where its going so please keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hey

Where's Part 2

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