All Comments on 'A Sister Surprise'

Great start. Respectfully request more of the same +.

One of the best stories I've read in a long time. You definitely need to win.

That as awesome. And that's no joke. Sorry I like bad puns as much as you seem to. I love your stories. My only complaint is you tease us and leave us hanging so often. You give us a set of blue balls. How did she get to call Avery mistress? Was she the sorority pet? Does she keep sharing Joe? Does Mom who also wears the nylons he likes, or dad ever find out? The end? Perhaps? Let's go with perhaps not. Please?!

In my opinion this has the perfect combination of an romantic incest situation and really bow chika wow sex when the sex is happening but managing to be really sweet inbetween. As someone who likes to read romantic incest a lot i really like that i have found one that i can get off to if i am in a mood to combine. i hope u write more about them and that they get an happily ever after together somewhere in the future with maybe some kids together, that they made themselves.

I enjoy your writing and really enjoyed this one!

You have just made an old man very happy …

Like all your stories, but this is a bit special - keep up the good work!

Mistress Jasman this is one of your best, I for one would like... no love to see Joey become the Master of all the girls in the sorority in his fresman year. His second year he adds the female facilty to his harem. At some point his mom and/or aunt catch him fucking sarahs ass as she screams out her first anal orgasm. Any way just a thought thank you for the good read.

Really good read. Hope to see a follow-up. I've read several of your other stories too, all very good. So thanks for yet another great read.

Request get the drawing boys to add illustrate the forthcoming chapters in the series if you plan to do sequels of this. Great making of a novella. Go for it my silky one!!!!

You never disappoint and this one is one of your best! I hope there will be more chapters!

This one definitely needs to be continued. I think you need to continue through the rest of his senior year in high school and well into his freshman year at his sister's college as the house fucker for her sorority. You can add the mother in the mix if you wish, but it would not be required.

Loved it, loved it, loved it.

You write great stuff any way, but once in a while something stands out for me and this one did.

Please do continue and make this a series!

the well-developed characters showed they had not only attraction but affection for each other. I liked it a lot!

I need more. Awesome

Great story definitely deserves a sequel

A great start to an on going story I hope. I really want to hear more of this couple.

Only once have I heard of a male joining an all female soriety. I guess i now know why.

Thank you SILKSTOCKINGSLOVER

Hi all,

Thanks so much for the early comments.

Oddly, this story originally was only supposed to be one chapter (I thought I actually ended the plot for once).

That said, I love these characters and am even playing with an illustrated chapter 2... but am unsure what kind of plot to do next....

Any ideas?

Jasmine

The sharing seems to be already in place, but more intimacy with sister and maybe mum.

Just suggestions.

Great story.

Definitely need more chapters to this story.

Please add more!

Very well written and i would love to see more of this story lol

As always your storylines and plots are So Very Horny and well written. This has the makings of a classic. 5 Star

Nice story. I know there will be more stories. When does he take MOM in nylons. Does he like the feel of nylons or just admire nice legs in nylons?

Holy Fuck... That's so hot and horny. Love it

Very very nice. Maybe a little sappy sometimes, but just fantastic!

I love the way you write. I can hear their voices in my head. Keep it up.

Solid 5 stars, 7 if allowed. I really like the way you write. Keep up the great work and Thank You!

Another great story. I'd like toe gear more about what happened before the epilogue, but enjoyed the glimpse into the future. More please!!

If only I had one! : (/

But a great story once again and a winner.

O O

^

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As the eagle has said before...Two Talons up. (oops make that three.)

An always remember that the tongue can be mightier than the sword (sometimes.)

Wow! Another great story from one of Literotica's best authors. A magnificent read.

Your stories never disappoint. Excellent Job!

At least one more chapter, maybe getting mom involved. This story has so much potential and you're the one who can pull it off.

This story demands we know what happens when he goes to college

Wow if I see the author name has being you I know 1000% this will be an excellent story..

Another great story from you, as if there would be a doubt. I've read other authors and you are by far my favorite. Please keep them coming.

This was a good story but it doesn't need to be continued, in my opinion. I've never been a fan of stories where the author tries to make you believe the characters love each other, but are OK with the other person fucking multiple people.

"I love you, now go fuck all these other people please."

I know my opinion probably isn't shared by many, but that's just how I feel.

Jasmine, this really was an amazing story.

I think I know how you seem to feel about doing sequels but, since this is incest and his sister is Bi, you should at least have them at home for a long weekend (Thanksgiving?) and bring mom and son, and finally all three together.

Really hope you write at least one more chapter, really enjoyed this one.

More chapters, please.

Unfuckingreal! I've been reading erotica for a "majority" of my 47 years and this is THE BEST story I've ever read! I'll be looking for your other stories for certain! Thank you for sharing! (Cudos to your editors as well! Many a hot story has turned sour due to lack of editing.). Only anonymous for lack of time to sign up.

Plz make a sequel. Harem style. Would love to read tht. There's no stories in this genre tht are good.

Silkstockingslover, you just keep getting better. Thank you for your entry in the Halloween Contest. It is a great story. I hope you continue it with maybe the continuation of his sexual education and the first time anal for him and what college he goes to or if he is held captive at her school. JohnP

ilovelegs@hotmail.com

You are amazing I have read every one of your stories.you should get a award for best on this site. Tim London ontario

more chapters please

you said "mom would have an empty nest when i leave for college......" leading me to believe that DAD was out of the picture already and then at the end you said "My fifth load was deposited in my sister's pussy back at home in our garage while our parents slept." and when i read the first quote i would have expected his sister to talk to his mother and him to wake up with his mother 's head bobbing not his sister but over all it was a great story just unsure on this end about the parents statement

by the way i gave you a five star rating because i found it to be great writing

Sequel please. A hot sister who is a bisexual slut and belongs to a sorority that is filled with bisexual sluts.

I find myself going back to your stories again and again. Partially by design and partially by rediscovery. I did not notice the author and was a page into the story when I looked up and saw why I was enjoying reading the story so very much.

A sequel (or 6) would be wonderful.

see above!!

Since I'm an aging comic book fan, this story caught my fancy in more ways than one! I got a huge laugh when I got to the part where "Amy" (the Pippi Longstocking clone) flirts with Joey about his 'size', and says, "I imagine you can really 'Pow Bam Pow' with that thing."

The thing I lament, about that passage, is that Jasmine is apparently NOT a geeky comic book fan enough to recall that there was a time - back in the mid-1960's - when the artists drawing the "Batman" comics actually used "Boff!" as one of their sound effects for a punch, in the fight-scene panels. The campy "Batman" TV show, also of the mid-60's, used the word once, during an episode's fight scenes - with the production crew not realizing that this particular word had slipped into the English language vernacular as a synonym for "fuck". Back then, you could say, "I boffed her last night," about some girl, and guys knew what you meant.

I can just picture a re-write of that scene, in this story... Amy tells Joey, "I imagine you can really 'Pow Bam Pow' with that thing."

And Joey - feeling his new-found courage - says, "I prefer 'boff' - it's a much more meaningful word..."

I'm hoping for a sequel, but Jasmine's going to have to find some way to get 'Dad' out of the picture. I thought that it was just Mom and Joey, living at home, until I got to the very end, where he and Sarah had their last sex of the night in the garage, while her *parents* (plural) slept, upstairs.

Only 5 stars because can't give more.

I read all your stories and I think it's one of your best, it feels like I not alone to think so judging by the amout of comments.

If you do a sequel, please dear, end it so we don't hang on the caracters for ever.

But anyhow I'm sure it will be funfuckingtastic.

with love D xx

God that was a fucking hot story...Please a sequel to this one! PLEASE?!

This is a great story, I really hope you keep it going. They would be the perfect couple to stay together and have a baby. She could always share with mommy.

SYL,

Another great story. Thanks!

one hell of a story.

please continue with a part 2

If you are looking for a starting point to Chapter Two, have Joe go to his sister's college and pledge a fraternity. Some frats have sister sororities, or alliances between two Greek houses. Have the sorority, as part of the initiation process for their new pledge class, borrow Joe to be used for some sort of sexual initiation for the new sisters. You might consider having the head of the sorority use him to deflower a virginal pledge, and have Joe object to doing it in the chamber you have established unless all the sisters leave. Or, perhaps, have him do the pledges one or two per nights -- you already established his stamina and ejaculate production -- while the sisters supposedly leave the couple alone, or the threesome alone, while watching on remote TV with a multicamera setup and eating popcorn, making lewd comments, and later have Harley Quinn bring The Joker to the Halloween party again, where an edited version of his weeklong fun and games with cuts, different camera angles, fuck-music, etc. like a student film is running on the sorority house's internal cable system. See my story "Loving Eyes" to get an idea of what you might do with an initiation scenario.

Surprise indeed, a chapter or more please. These two could make it a lifetime duet.

You are a great writer. I want and look forward to seeing where it leads. If you plan to write another Chapter but if not it was great!!!

You're the best SSL.

THANK YOU

A little mushy towards the end, but what the heck. Still a 5 out of 5

As always your one of the best. So many possibilities here I hope you follow some of them with future chapters.

way to go. Loved it

I don't think you said "sexy nylon-clad feet" enough might want to edit it and say it 200 more times

My brother worked in a sorority while going to uni, maybe that could work for a story line.

you should continue right from before the epilogue and this story could become a nice long series.

These girls want to be judged by their brains and they walk around sucking random people off. A time honored way to be respected.

Love the storyline!

Don't let the haters get you down this story was good

Would love to read more about Joe & Sarah. I just loved this story. Of course, you are one of my favorite writers on this site! Is there more in store for them?

Great story. You should continue this at least another chapter or 2.

I love all of your stories, but I think this one is my favorite. Please continue!

Another instant hit from you. Would love to see at least one more chapter of this tale, please consider it.

5/5

By far your best story. And that is saying a lot. More please.

Omg so fucking sucking hot. Oh what would I not give to be part of this outrageously sexy and fucked up orgy of sucking and fucking. My two live in fuck buddies and I acted some of this story out, with a couple of their best friends, we got so high on the insane level pleasure that we passed out for at least 3 minutes until we could go again, the second time we passed out and fell asleep. Oh fucking wow, must have more please and soon. Best ever from you, cunt lapping sex maniac, Lancashire U K

Now must go get fucked into oblivion again and again. 10/10.

So much in one story! I hope you bring them back for another! Amazing!

I have no suggestions of how to continue this tale. But sure hope you do. You are one of my favorite writers. Please, another chapter.

your writing just gets better and better

Every story you do is simple perfect in my opinion.

If this continues please don't let it be mostly orgy etc. Keep it brother and sister 👌

Always well written and extremely erotic!

Liked that brother and sister got on and had respect for each other.

Loved he had an enormous c...crush on his sister!!! (As a woman love big crush stories!!!)

Really enjoyed the fact that she shared him along the way, possessive with him with the wrong type of girl but happy for those she trusted to enjoy him as well.

The ex showing up was a treat as it served him right! and nice that bro stood up for sis but showed she wasn't just using her brother as feelings for her ex appeared to be gone.

Would love to read more on these characters thank you and as mentioned 5 stars and thank you for a brilliant story.

Great read loved whole story would love to read more of these two. Maybe he visits her again so she can share him and help him more before he goes away on his own. Also maybe xmas home visit for the sister. Thanks for your stories.

Dear Jas

Definitely a winner by my (high) standards. Five stars * * * * * for sure. Beautiful plot-creatively filthy. Wonderful language-consistently dirty. Outstanding story concept- constant reminders throughout of the intense incestuous relationship. (would like to have seen the bathroom situation developed further). Your coda left many doors open. Good luck in the competition. Love you. Love your silk stockings.

I. Jack Auff

We need a continuation to this story. A fantastic start but we need more!

Yes, very well written and arousing too !! Certainly a big step for a brother and sister: which is so hot. Yes, screwing his sister and her sorority friends is one great achievement !! Now, Sarah and Joey should bang each other when home alone and have some uninterrupted play time. This story has so much potential and I cannot wait for more chapters. Joey needs to power screw and eat her until she can't take it. Then they will be inseparable. Thank you.

What more can I say that has not probably already been said?

If this story does not win the contest, I don't know what will.

Very well written, easy to read and follow. Well thought out and very believable.

Very good as a stand alone story, or the prelude to something more, but it seems to me like it would be hard to top perfection.

Nicely done!!!

chrystal

I love all of your stories, but you've really outdone yourself with this one. Talk about hot! If I could give it more than five stars, I would. Please, give us a sequel.

Sure hope you write of their further adventures!

Great pace and awesome sex! Let's make it Halloween Week so you can write more! Best incest slut writer!!!!

Very hot and sexy story.

Have you wrote a sequel?

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

This story is like the rest of your entries, I always look forward to what ever you submit because they are always entertaining and excellent

Love it!

Great story, I look forward to more to come. :)

Great story! Look forward to all of your works and additions to this story.

Great story, as all those I have read! Would like to see more on this story line. thank you.

This story begs for a sequel or two. Something with the mom and the history in the sorority house.

Would love to see additions to this story!

I look forward to more adventures of this guy, his sitter and all college girls that will be wanting him. He just may end up a prisoner .

As with so many of your stories, well written, good dialog, and hot sex. Looking forward to more from these two, or many?

The only way it could be better would be if Sarah shared Joey with Mom..... Mom could try out Joey's cock and then have Sarah eat her.... While Joey reamed Sarah's ass....

Amazimg!!! Please write more about these two!!!!!