All Comments on 'A Slave?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
NOT BAD

would be better if it was more descriptive

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good but...

way too many typos you really should do a better job of proofreading your stories. Otherwise it was interesting.

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