All Comments on 'A Slow Submission Ch. 02'

Why do I feel a bit of 'non-fiction'/reality is the basis of this story?

Very good beginning. I, like many, like a slow build up. I do think it appropriate that it's not 'romantic' since the purpose is to describe her change (and especially through trust). I believe there could be more women and men who could get where you are if trust was the key!

Keep writing!

I really like this story, but could you make the chapters more than just a few paragraphs? Please don't be one of those authors who just DRAG their stories out.

And teasing, she is starting to have naughty thoughts fueled by him, but very subtly...GOOD JOB...keep going!

That's a story about a marraige based on bullshit alright. Pity...

Very erotic for a married couple in love to push the envelope with their discoveries. Please continue.

I have just finished reading both of your stories, and I feel astonished as to why you haven't written more.

Your stories flowed like a mountain stream, drawing the reader, and calling him into the next coming paragraph over and over again.

Beautiful writing; amazing writing; we need more.

Your faithful admirer,

Nesher

I agree with nesher- this is delightful and I'd love to read more stories by you.

This is fab. Please write some more.

Fantastic but for goodness sake don't stop now.

To sound likes it, and that’s enough for me. I know it sucks.