by Kantarii
This story is certainly taking a direction now and the characters showing a bit more of what is going on in their minds. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh Crikey, Kant. I want more of Ash & Kimberly. This teasing us with chapters is kinda making me crazy. I'm greedy, impatient. Kimberly's seduction of Asleigh is really beautiful & tender. I love Kimberly's playfulness. Great characterization. This story is deepening emotionly. Looking forward to more.
Would be so cute to see a sissy faggot get hard for a girl. Surprised Ashleigh hasnt given more thought to just being bi. What a selfish bunch they seem to be.
As usual for me, I find the emotional discoveries even more erotic than the physical ones...in fact, it's the emotions that are the true "us" and they hold the puppet strings to our sexual actions. A nice pace in the unfolding of the story, in my opinion.
This is a chapter that could be made into a very hot movie scene. It did in my mind anyway.
So many twists and turns, I'm hungry for the next chapter. I love how this chapter ends.....*sigh*