by Kantarii
Again kudos, I love a good story and you write great ones. I've now "favorited" you as an author. I look forward to each part, and hope for more stories from you too. I rate this story so far as 5 star. Keep it up and continue to champion the right for all genders to be accepted for who they are. By the way, I saw your profile pic, very attractive.
Hope you don't get to bored with my constant talk about the quality & intricacies of your narrative & characters. This is amother astonishing addition to the series. For those of us who have suffered gender-based abusobe violence, this was a realistic & painful read. Thank goodness for Brenda or Ashleigh would probably been beayen to death.
Okay Kant, I'm caught up to this point. Normally this wouldn't be the exact kind of story I would read. However, I'm intrigued and impressed that you have woven a nice pattern of human emotions and desires in this. Thus, the sex scenes do carry that message forward, and our eavesdropping on Ashleigh's thoughts/emotions/desires fills in the true message. It is that exploration that will bring me back to read the conclusion of your tale...I'm hoping for the best for our sweet Ashleigh, for in truth we are all in search of something which resolves and settles the questions we ask ourselves about ourselves.
It is good that Kimberly now knows exactly what Kryss is like. This Chapter is excellent!