All Comments on 'A Son Forced Pt. 07'

This series was never really my thing. Although it is brilliantly written. One big plus is that the conclusion of this family may make more time to hear from the Strawter Family. *fingers crossed*

This is one of my favorite stories on Lit. And I’m sad to see it end. I’m glad you left it open at least in part. That way we as readers can draw our own conclusions, and at the same time hope you’ll get the itch again and revisit A Son Forced at a later date. Keep up the good work Soul, can’t wait for the next chapter of A family destroyed!

I know you don't like these comments much, and I know this is the last chapter but...

did you prove read this?

You stumbled over your words and names sometimes, on the second page you called his Sister Scarlet and you forgot some words.

Like I said im being a dick here but I just wanted to get out there

It was a pleasure to read the last chapter of the story that started it all! I've been your fan ever since I read chapter 1, and you never failed to astonish me with your stories (especially the ones I requested). :)

Lol

You hit almost everything I wanted to see resolved in this story. And I really enjoyed it. I know you hate to hear this, but, there is still some miles in this story if you ever want to come back to it.

ENJOYED IT!

Ah yes. The college years. Hehe

Oh hell no you cant be sone with this i want moreeeeeee

Does he take Morlock daughter as a sub?

I don't know you tell me.

Please continue on with this story. It's one of the best I've read on Literotica. Such a good plot. This story has much potential.

I agree with everyone else we need more. You left one heck of a cliff hanger.

I'll post an official comment later. Anyway I loved it, even if I would like more, I really liked this one. There is sort of a cliff hanger at the end but I'm sure you have your reasons.

Need more don't end now. You left one hell of clif hanger. Like did his mom and aunt give grils or boy or one of each.

Master dumbass thinks because he has a big dick he can just ram in he's a man in reality he's weak. Jeff Foxworthy said it beat women are like diesel engines they may take a while to warm up but when they do they can keep going and going and men are like bottle rockets.

Thete his summer vacation you tell that now

Do what now?

That what you should to next in this story

I see.

Soul your site another story that's got me hooked please write more of Jason except add more Mary, I was disappointed that she wasn't in more once she wastrained, some more with her mum would be good to

What about a book tour?

Yeah, I've thought about that too jneric. It might happen, you never know.

Please tell me theres going to be more

Should add her to the mix?

When will you publish the next chapters.

I don't know.

I've been waiting for Jacklyn to make another appearance but didn't think it would turnout that way. I didn't think a dom would turn so easily into a sub but I really enjoyed it.

Third time I've read this, are you sure there can't be another story to follow on from this one? (Please)

Please please please, write another load of chapters for this, I've read this series many times now really enjoy it. We've been waiting long enough for more.

Wow. I didn't think there was that much of call for a continuation of this series given past comments on ealier chapters. I'll see what my twisted mind can come up with.

Okay, you asked for it.

Cue dramatic music.

A Son Force: The College Years is in the works.

wow another one of your series that has blown my mind thank you for this and for any and all work you are cooking up next

When do you think you will have the next chapter out soul?

I've read this three times now it got better as he gained control. Looking forward to the next story.

How do you expect to get pass the courtroom's metal detector wearing a vibrator?

You do amazing work very rereadable and to the naysayer complaining about getting a vibrator through the metal detector those kind of vibrators are not all metal and some are not enough metal content to set off the metal detector since those generate electrical fields that react to metal objects and low metal objects like a belt buckle could be blocked by thick enough layers of clothing and not set it off also the devices vary in power rating the metal detector at an airport or federal building would be set off while the one at the courthouse or a sports stadium wont be

Excellent stuff. But I fear that is the end of this series.

Wait, he is 18 and in chapter 2, his family picks him up from school and makes him go home with them? Couldn't he just say no, after all he is 18.

One bedroom had already been commandeered to be turned into a dungeon for Mara and Scarlet's appetite. Once it's been soundproof that is.

Will he ever use the dungeon on them? Also why did they make this dungeon? To use on him again? If not then who?

"Wake up Mom," Jason said forcefully. Adding a third finger hoping it would stimulate her dreaming mind. Why didnt he just slap the shit out of her?

While she knew nothing would repair the damage that had been done over the last three years. She did hope that she was helping to heal those wounds. That maybe one day whatever hurt she and Margret had unintentionally caused would be a thing of the past. Where they could enjoy each others company. Laugh, cry, argue, mourn together as each others partner. However, those days were a long way off.

I dont get it? I see them living happily? I dont see him resenting them or whatever, doesnt that mean that this weakling traitor shit already forgave them?

"It's going to look odd that you only live with us, and not out enjoying the night life like any normal teenage boy." So they all know hes missing out on life? All he does is school and work and get used by his family?

Out of all the boys and men she had dated none could ever compare to her brother, her beloved master. What? Who did she date? I thought the parents had locked her in.

Your mother, your slut, your submissive will always be here to help you raise these babies that you gift us with," Uhhh who in their right mind would want that!!!!

By the way theyre all talking and doing things yet he says 0 words? Where is his pov? He didnt say anything just licked their pussy even when he knows hes becoming a father?

The club will provide refreshments, and reimburse you should anything get broken during it. What do you say Jason?" Scarlet asked with pleading eyes. Isnt she his wife? Her money his money or whatever? Doesnt that mean the club is his.

What about me Jason? Am I to waste away in the shadows? Never knowing the feeling of being yours, Yes bitch forever suffer for slapping and ignoring him.

What the hell theyve been whoring margret out? And why are scarlet and mara pissed? They set this up lol?

Oh my!" Scarlet said from across the room.

"Take care of it," Morlock said slapping his fat cock against Scarlet's face. I think you meant margrets face? Also was this really necessary? Margrets getting fucked while he has tofuck some chick he doesnt even want. And with a monster cock at that..

He'll beat me for making him look bad in front of everyone," she whispered low, Im not saying Jason should beat hit subs but he should make them fear his punishments like she fears her father.

So? That boy doesn't know how to take care of his sub. This bitch is to high willed she needs to be broken, Hes right. But instead of Margret being fucked by him i wish it was the mom, she needs tobe put in her place.

Margret had hoped to save this for Jason when they were alone.

I have a feeling these girls are living their lives and he is just catering to their needs,doing nothing of his own volition. He doesnt take them to the dungeon to explore any kink or fetish he has or whateve, and hes been with margret for months and she didnt even show him what she likes(hogtie)

Great story. Just once I'd like to see the MC act slightly realistic. You beat me until I'm bleeding and pass out? Your punishment is no orgasm for a day. You break the girl I like and interfere with my personal life? Well, let's watch porn. The mother is a real psycho. I love how great the characters are written that you get mad at them.

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

Thanks for writing it and thanks for sharing it….more please!

This is the worst series I have ever read

The story is nowhere near being finished. There’s so much more to the story so many an answer questions needs to be answered. Did he end up with morlocks daughter as a sub? Did his sister actually get pregnant like she wanted? Did he even attend college? Not that he had to he had enough money but still. Did his mum and aunt have quadruplets or one baby, bloody hell I could go on and on and on. Get your fucking arse into gear and finish the story properly.. after saying all that I still gave you⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Need more. All of your stories stop short all. Could use more chapters