All Comments on 'A Stormy Night'

Well done. You're usual well written story. Keep them banging for a while.

I was hoping that she would feel the love that her son had for her, and perhaps after they have been doing their sexual tryst for a while, she will come around to feel the same way towards him as he feels towards to her.

Thanks for the good read.

First, you are a terrific writer and one of the best on this site. Thanks for adding a new story - well written!

Secondly, what happened to all of your archived stories????

I have been a faithful follower of Baron de Sade ... I hope you continue with more stories and its very particular style ... I also consulted with the collection of stories that had previously

This story made me cum so much in my moms own panties

Another wonderful submission by BDS. It's great to see your stuff back on Lit! - Victor

I only hope it is more permanent.

Absolutely great story, told with your usual highly visualized, erotic language.

In a word, brilliant.

You are of course a fabulous writer but I thought that we had lost you here on the Lit as you only post your stories on Amazon now!

Fantastic to have you back on Lit!

Please allow me to join in the bandwagon of your fans.

This was a hot story. Well told. Exciting !!!

Thanks Don

This story is awful! I stopped reading about midway of page 4. Caleb was right when he said that h hadn't rapped his mother at the motel. Then, when he is home he does. I lost count of how many times I read "gravity flatten breasts". I don't have ADD, as I'm sure, other Lit reader don't. You rely far too much on hyperbole. How could you write about a sweaty sex scene where the female has become covered in sweat, including her hair, then have her simply get dressed? Too much ridiculousness for me. You are on my favorite author's list, but no longer. While many, many readers are not very discriminating, so long as they cum, I prefer a well written story. Plenty of authors do it well. Ahabscribe, RGJohn, Alwayswantedto, Many Feathers,and Mentalcase, just to name a few. I know that you are capable of better. I only hope you will rise to the occasion.

does one go to jail for incest?

beauty, sensuality, and pleasure gained from a woman's breasts that lay flat, or almost flat against her body and when she lays on her back. They are so smooth, soft, warm, pliable, and yummy that makes lovers (male and/or female) to keep coming back. thank you for this great story......

So very erotic.All the right words and phrases just as they should be

Uh, damn! You have talent with words. Would like for you write more stories with this style writing but with more teasing, longer love making of both oral and vaginal, and maybe a deeper story line. You are good.😉

Towards the end of page three it sure sounded like rape to me. When the mother keeps saying no and the idiot son doesn't stop forcing himself on her, that's rape.

The old fart.

This story started going down hill earlier in the story but what with the various plastic dicks and the big black strap on, the story for me went to hell in a hand basket in page 5. The mother talking about doing the father in the ass with the big strap on was the last straw. Gave this story a vote of one then moved on. Crap.

The old fart.

This story belongs in the nonconcept category

I just don't like RAPE, and that's what it was.

The rest of your story, was a good one,

sometimes some writers get carried away.

The read was ok!!!!

..THANKS..

What started out as very good story of incest, eventually degenerated into a story of rape and unending perversion. Sadly none of the "garbage" on the last thee pages was needed. They only served to turn a potentially good story to total trash!!!!

it's a rape story...

Too long…

Oh fuck yes. Whore mommy needs his incest baby. Feed him sweet incest milk. Fuck his cum into her pregnant whore body. Fuck yessss

Honestly? Poor punctuation, words that didn't apply, repetitive references to evil and such... If you have a thesaurus, a dictionary, and ability to learn verbs, nouns, etc., I suggest you use/do all of them. UNDERBELLY?????????? Too wordy and slow moving...