All Comments on 'A Stranger's Surprise'

WOW!!!!! I sure need to find that store - and the horny babe with the butt plug! I guess I could do the same thing that guy did - but not be so fucking disagreeable about it. After all - a fuck is a fuck, and you sure don't get many opportunities in department stores!

This could have been outstanding were it proof-read and polished a bit; perhaps an eye toward more realistic dialogue. Good effort, though.

Could have been better, but proof read the words before releasing next time.