All Comments on 'A Student's Naughty Detention'

by Gingerleah

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 6 years ago
not bad

a little bit much for a shy little virgin, been better if she was seduced

GingerleahGingerleahalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading.

@averygoodlay thanks for your comment. I understand what you're saying, but sometimes the seemingly quiet ones are the ones to surprise us the most. That's what I was going for!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
EXCELLENT!

I love a story where a “good girl” decides it more exciting to be naughty.

I think she can now discover her dominant side. Mr. Montgomery only THINKS he’s in charge.

Keep writing!

Rick

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