All Comments on 'A Sub of All Kinks Ch. 10'

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Rad'lRad'labout 18 years ago
Wow! Kinky is barely the word for it.

Smegger:

These comments apply to all 10 chapters in your tale. Most unusual and erotic. I was fascinated beyond belief. A soft BDSM start - rapidly growing in intensity - kept me reading.

There were a few typos that would benefit from a more careful edit but - the emotion came across very, very well.

Thanks.

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just lookin for a decent place to post up my work. :) I like to collaborate with most of the stories too, here are the people I currently collaborate with: kitazkitten: Onyx Dreams series, A Sub of All Kinks series we write for fun so please, don't get overly worked up abou...

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