All Comments on 'A Submissive's Surrender'

Spelling is horrendous. Unreadable.

Then try again. This was horrible.

Work on your grammar. I could barely read it work on it and it MIGHT be better.

with a little time and spelling checks it would be easier to read. I could tell where it was going. This is a great start. Don't give up. Just check grammar and stuff. Good job. :)

I definitely enjoyed reading this, although most people only capitalize the first letter of Him or His or the like :)

Don't listen to the negative comments - you wrote a wonderful story!!! Keep writing!!

I really enjoyed this story except that the capital "HIM/HIS/HE) really took me away from it as well as "my little one"