All Comments on 'A Summer Evening'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
hot...

Way to short in my opinion but for what there was I gave you a "5" anyway ~~ you could have added a few more para's just to make it hotter.!**

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More please

This is a great start. I would love to see where it goes from here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not Really a Story, Rather Just a Moment

This reminded me of the braggadocious bar or sea stories on my youth.

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