All Comments on 'A Summer Heat'

by Stephen7Redo

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More lisa

Why didn't hub get crack at Lisa while wife watched and then licked them both clean? That would be a vacation. Think about it.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969almost 15 years ago
Good story.

Well written and erotic as well. Good to see a couple in love making love to each other no one else.

Ducky7Ducky7almost 15 years ago
Excellent story

I really liked the play between the two. Thanks for a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Bummer

A long time to go nowhere.

Photo_GWPhoto_GWabout 8 years ago
Realistic and sexy

While more interaction between Donnie and Lisa would be more of the fantasy, and more expected, what actually happened in the story is more realistic: a committed couple being aroused by outside forces/people and each other.

A little long, but a nice story.

DrSemblanceDrSemblanceover 7 years ago

Very well done!

An easy 4

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Like

I Like Mary Ann and Donnie, they are a normal loving couple.

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I have been a member of Literotica since 2002. I thoroughly enjoy writing erotica and sharing my work with you. I'd like to invite you to read my growing body of work here on Lit. I'm especially proud of my 'Tuition Time' series and the follow-on series of 'Reese and David'....