All Comments on 'A Summer's Breeze Ch. 03'

It's time for the aunt to do him

I want to see him fuck both of them

I want to read about Aunt Jill seducing him -- her inner struggle with morality vs. sexuality -- and then neighbor Nancy spying on him doing HER. Then ... how about he does BOTH! Keep it up ...

What a lucky guy to have all that fun. Hope he screws his aunt silly. Write about it.

He has what they want, soooo he should give it too both of them!! Maybe Mom can find out too, & he will have a lot of confidence come school time. But he has to finish off Nancy!!

OK I'm outta here goin to read chptr 1 then 2, & any others you might have posted. Looking forward to more good stuff just like this. Thanks for a Hot, Exciting, Sexy, read!!

WANNA READ ABOUT HIS AUNT SEDUCEING HIM AN HIM FUCKING WHILE HIS MOM COMES HOME CATHING THEM AN WANTS HIM TO AUNT BREAKS DOWN HER MORALITY

since aunt caught him with the old lady next door. I want his mom to catch him with his aunt/her sister. Then his mom will want him next.

I want to make it clear that I LOVE this story and can't wait for more, but I did want to point out something that didn't really make sense to me. At the part where Nancy starts titfucking Donnie, you say it happens while he's still sucking her nipple:

""Yeah, suck my tits, Donnie. Nurse them."

Nancy could feel Donnie's cock nestle between her breasts. She squeezed the sides together, forming a tight channel around the boy's thick meat. As he sucked, she reveled in the feeling, and began moving her breasts up and down, fucking him with her tits.

The new sensation surprised him. He popped the nipple from his mouth and gazed at his neighbor."

Even if he was long enough (which based your descriptions, he isn't unless he has hands that are a foot or more across) that her breasts were at mouth-level while also wrapped around his cock, it would still make for a super awkward position for both of them. I can only assume it was an oversight while you were editing, but these things happen. Other than that, I loved the story start to finish. Keep writing!

mini chapters that are actually randomly placed change points. I wish there was more continuity .start, stop, start, stop, start, stop,

A big titted, horny neighbor; every neighborhood should have two, or three, just to keep things interesting, and the young boys educated. LOL

Something tellls me this horny neighbor's gonna be licking her neighbor, soon.

LOL

GeoD