All Comments on 'A Surprise for My Kitten'

I really enjoyed the story but you jumped in and out of first and third person a lot which was confusing but generally very good

You lost me the minute you locked her in a cage and then gave her to the woman with "a mouth pursed with an evil pout." I was done reading it at that point. I will try another of your stories but if it follows with this vein, you will be added to my list of "Never read their stories again".