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by nikilachan

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ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
Good work!

Better writing on the second chapter. You're improving! I love your word choices, like "tongue tango," etc. Keep it up! FIVE STARS!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good saga!!!

I really enjoyed your story from a woman's perspective!! It was well written, drawing me into it with my mind's eye "seeing" the plot unfold very well! I really got into it and I am a guy!!😎

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