All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Titties Ch. 01'

Seems like a pretty fair start on what could be a decent Mature story. Not anywhere near the premise implied in the title at this point. I vote you continue and we will see what you can do.

credible story, nicely written

keep going :-)

...to another. My friend Wax Philosophic mentioned this story to me so I decided to give it a look and I'm glad I did---it shows promise. Your preamble said that this is your first try at writing. Are you sure? Because if that's so you're a natural. I'm now looking forward to reading more to see how the story develops.

It was fun to read. Hope it has a sequel!!