All Comments on 'A Teacher's Punishment'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Dream On

Dre am on boy, dream on ! Are you sure you are old enough to be on this site ? But there are worse stories in here !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Better grammer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

punctuation would be nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wrong words

Nice story but there are several wrong words, where and were are swapped in one place and wrong in others. Best read stuff you write at least 3 times and get it proof read by someone else if possible. 😊

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