All Comments on 'A Tease's Public Payback'

Consual group sex.

This work was absolutely phenomenal. The level of raw fantasy here is phenomenal. The segway from the bathroom to the theater was so smooth I only put half a thought into why the fuck a hotel had an adult theater attatched to a coed shower. The writing itself was very smooth and flowed well. There was next to zero plot or wind up and sometimes that is really what one is looking for in erotica. The way you wrote the waves of rising pleasure had me edging right along with the narrator to an extremely explosive climax when you wrote in the final crescendo. You even wrapped it up briefly enough that I actually read the end. So rarely does that actually happen. Kudos. Breadcrumbs. All the praise.

I dream of being used like this just a slut with holes to be used by anyone in front of people then having them pee on me.