All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 18'

We have missed your stories, but thanks for another solid. But with the delay between stories, I am forced to re-read some of the earlier chapters to catch up--actually this is a good thing as your other chapters are all great.

Loving your work. Each chapter is really good. A request please for this to continue

So glad to have another update, i've been following this for years! Sounds like you have a lot more coming soon!

Another great story, as I knew it would be. I only as that you please, please don't make us wait another year for the next chapter.

thrilled to read another instalment of his great series. can't wait to read chapter 19!

Ahhhh so good! Can't wait for 19!!

A big thank you for continuing this hot series. Your ability to pick up seamlessly thr actions and feelings of the characters is amazing.

Please continue.

this story is SO GOOD, the tease, the temptation....

If it does come to an end, PLEASE write more!!

(Thank you from New Zealand!)

This is by far my favorite series and I check it often for the next chapter. What a tease for 18 to be so short! I've definitely got a love/hate going on with it right now. Bring on 19!!!!…please.:)

Great to see you writing again! Especially since it's a chapter of this fantastic series. As a reader, it was worth the wait.

Keeping the international vibe going, your work's appreciated in the UK too. This latest instalment is hot with a plot, the hallmark of this awesome series. The teaser will ratchet up the demand for Chapter 19. Great job.

It was well worth the wait Jack. Hope Chapter 19 is right around the corner!

the best story on literotica by far, and it's still as exciting as in the begining. Waiting eagerly for the next chapters!

So glad to see Chapter 18. I hope Chapter 19 arrives sooner rather than later. And I hope the story continues beyond the last day that Pam, Beth, and Ron are alone. As I mentioned in previous comments, I hope Sue is involved with Ron again at some point. And when you do finish this series, please continue to write other stories. Thanks so much!

I have yet to read this, but I wanted to thank you and praise you for your previous works. I want more of your work so much that I often imagine your work in other mediums and cannot decide if it would be the best thing ever or if it will not translate well to other mediums.

All this to say thank you from the bottom of my heat and keep up the good work!

I can't wait for more!!!!!

Great chapter once again, superb stuff, as good as ever, but please don't let the wait for the next one be long, because that tease for the next chapter sounds incredible!

I'm glad you went with your strategy of having a shorter story and publishing it now, rather than waiting. It's always great to have an update. I agree with the commenter above that it would be great to have Sue return. (And while we're leaving the island, I hope Lil comes back for one more round too.) While the vacation looks like it's coming to a close, I hope you can draw it out for some time to come. Or even have it continue after they return, although I imagine that would be hard to do with the same tone. I was thinking, perhaps you could write a parallel story of Amy's side trip, and perhaps what temptations happened to her there? That could almost be its own many-part story. Anyway, happy to read this, and now once again looking forward to future chapters.

One of the best stories on the site!

This is by far the best series on Literotica!!! Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter!

I'm curious what are other people's favorite chapters...?

Mine is probably the shower scene with Sue, but the locker scene is also up there...

Yea I'd agree, the shower chapter is my fav too, it's absolutely superb. Love chapters 7, 9, 12 and 17 too.

I think it has to be the beach scene when Beth 'discovers' Ron. Or in the room when Ron is sucked off by the married woman.

Cannot wait for the next chapter, are we likely to see it anytime soon Jack?

wow...pls....start writing the next chapter!!!

More more more

Beth is the hottest character on this site. i am crazy anxious to see what happens next

Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter and THEN THE NEXT ADVENTURE OF BETH, RON, PAM , AND AMY!!

best story on here by far - keep it going!

Jack, can you give us an idea of when we might see Ch. 19?

I love this series! Beth and Pam are so sexy! I was wondering if there are other great teasing series like this one on the website. Can you guys tell me other good ones to read?

Ron and Pam have got to do something together, please write the next story. One of them is going to give in to temptation, it's just a question of how. It's time to end the suspense. This is the best story series on the site, keep it going.

How about Pam fucking with Ron and another guy in a 3some. ..

Hey Jack!

Just a friendly reminder that it's a new year...time for a new chapter!! :)

When you search for Jack under the author index, it doesn't come up anymore. I'm thinking that means he no longer is active.

Nope....still here. Writing, but slowly.

Good to hear you're still writing Jack, cannot wait for the next chapter, especially with that teasing sneak peak, checking back here on an almost daily occurrence, hope it's not too far away

You can do it, Jack. Make shorter chapters if it helps you!

....how down I got when I read "he's gone" and how excited I got when he said he's still writing. This can't be healthy! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Any update Jack?? Desperate for the next chapter!

thats all i got tosay...cant wait

come on Jack Please

I am a big fan of this story. Please continue and complete the story. My cock is aching for your updates.

Hi jack, any update on the next chapter please? Absolutely desperate here! Checking pretty much daily , can't wait!

Is there going to be a Chapter 19 in the near future?

I can't wait for chapter 19!

Please submit the next chapter. Even if it's just a page or two.

Really Jack can't wait what new. You are the best writer

Desperate for the next chapter Jack, hope the wait isn't for much longer!

Count me in for knowing what Amy has been up to.

Wouldn't it be fun if Amy and Beth were secretly in contact this whole time?

But....... since Ron is Frankencock, wouldn't that be bad for his virgin girlfriend? After he takes her cherry, she has to make him stop. Then Mike and Lil come back into play, Or the WhitHat guy from the bar and scuba trip, to help introduce Amy to sex before she can begin to handle Ron. That's why she enjoys watching her mom and Ron, thats what she had in mind, and Amy planned this with Beth in advance.

What would be also fun is if everyone later ganged up on Beth, doing to her what she had been doing to them. Making Beth watch Ron and Pam while she couldn't do anything would be amazing.

I love this series and I agree with all the comments below. This story is one of the best anywhere; however, if one is caught up with all chapters, it's hard to remember what's happened because so much time passes between updates. Please publish the next chapter!!! We're dying of curiosity out here!! :)

Jack your stories are amazing. These reviewer comments are annoying. Take your time Jack, it's your finished product we love. To anyone who can't wait any longer I suggest starting back at chapter 1, I know I have a few times and it's just as good the next times around. I do love the idea one commenter had below of them turning the tables on Beth. I'd love to see Pam and Ron making life miserable for her for a while.

I've seen a couple comments saying they want Amy and Beth to be in cahoots. Ultimately you gotta do you, and I love this story and trust your judgement. But I think it's a shitload hotter if Ron's transgressions with Beth remain just that--transgressions! If Amy's in on it, the naughtiness goes down a peg, I'd say. While I'm lobbying you, I would just add that I'd like to see Susan have another crack at Ron, this time maybe with a consummation! But that's just my two cents, you are the bad ass here. I 've been checking this fucking thing for updates for more than a decade now, lord knows I will keep doing so. Love your work, man.

Hi Jack, as we approach the one year anniversary of Ch. 18, I was just wondering if you have an update on the progress of Ch. 19?

Cannot wait, this is truly the best erotic story series of all time. Keep up the great work

everything in my life goes bad. A new chapter would help me forget about my problems. come on jack, please. this is our game of thrones.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Looking forward to the next chapter...

Pretty sure he's dead. Best story on here but no updates only explanation is he's dead. Not bad was such shot story

I am sure he is just busy with life. Be patient.

Dear JackKing, do you accept scene and storyline suggestions from readers? I love your story, and would love to contribute some ideas.

Just let the guy write.

Story isn't over and he's not dead. I've been following this series for over 7+ years. Take a look at the release schedule. It's sporadic to say the least. I just wish he's give us updates.

Keep up the good work Jack.

Glad to see your still here!!!

Cant wait to see more of your genius

Jackking, teaching patience for ~20 years

Cannot wait for the next chapter, this series is the best of all time.

yeah hes dead its over

it's barely been a year since the last chapter. That's not evidence of Jacks death by a long shot. If were still waiting in 2024 I'll consider it.

Yea if you keep an eye on his favourites list stuff gets added all the time. There's bben longer gaps than a year between chapters before.

Hopefully the next chapter is up soon though, this is the best story on the site. Eagerly awaiting the next one

Please!!

I have only recently found this story and agree with the other commenters, it’s the best story that I’ve come across. I am so looking forward to a continuation.

As much as I enjoyed your other two submissions I’m hoping you continue this story before taking time to write others. Please find time to continue as we are all waiting

I could read an entire LIBRARY of books about Beth. She is so seXXXy!

The sugar ice cream cone blow job on the beach?

Her insatiable sexual appetite all the while twisting and turning the tables of shame onto her sexual prey is so deliciously tantalizing.

More...Beth. Please!

(please note, I understand completely that I have no standing whatsoever to make any demands upon you and that, at the heart of the matter, I'm really just trying to express extreme gratitude to you for sharing these adventures with us. That being said . . . )

I, too, have just recently discovered these stories, and I DEMAND MORE, DAMN IT! The entire world is a darker, colder place without chapter 19... YOU are the only one who can save us from the cold, dark hell we find ourselves in. Won't you please help? Please?

Checking everyday for the next chapter, hope it’s soon, simply the best erotic story series out there

You're taking this to another level... the anticipation is killing us!!! There have been 3 or 4 new iPhones released since chapter 18...

Man,

I posted before "More Beth"...This is by far my favorite erotic story I have read and you are my favorite author. We would ALL love to see another chapter (or two, or three) to this; or I for one would love to see different stories revolving around Beth. Good God, the way you write her is so seductively sexy!

What you do differently, and what distinguishes you as an amazing writer, is to give distinct, consistent, and strong personality traits to your characters. The result, for the reader, is a MUCH more vivid and almost tangible experience of the story as it unfolds. I cant state this enough, Beth's character exemplifies this. Her: words, intentions, and actions are all very consistent with the persona you have ascribed to her.

Most "authors" of erotica PALE in comparison. They get so caught up in the seedy details of the sex, but have completely undeveloped characters/personas, which leaves a very vapid experience for the reader.

Thank you for sharing your creative genius with us; I would LOVE to read more!

Did I mention Beth lol?

God, the way you write her is so realistic. A sex crazed vixen who both seduces and manipulates an unwitting younger man, all the while playing mind games affording herself plausible deniability while still taking what she wants, when she wants it, and as much as she wants. Its so realistic, true to experience, of the character of this persona.

The salvo for such a story, would be to see her have an entire night, or weekend, of complete, unbridalded satisfaction with her sex-toy, who she has lead and built up into a frenzy of pent up passion that needs releasing (as she does herself). I think the sexiest turn of events would be to use her manipulative prowess to ditch Pam (the prude) out of the room; so she can use her favorite new (cock) toy for her sole satisfaction for 72 hours of: wet, sloppy, animalistic sexual release. Then, at the end, while shes casually lighting up a smoke wearing nothing but black, thigh-high stockings, her black stoletto heels driving into the back of Rons neck, as her legs are wrapped around his face, while the lips of her mouth are gently kissing the head of his throbbing cock...in between the sounds of her SLURPING...SUCKING...SWALLOWIBG the very last vestige if his seed, murmers to herself -

"Im going to NEED my favorite FUCK-TOY <---slurping on COCK...on a VERY regular basis"...Ron cant fathom a response as both his eyes and sensations are transfixed on his- hot, sweaty, salty, wet cum dripping out of the lips of her swollen pink pussy, the cherry red hot lips of her ass, his thighs pulsating as his cum is dripping from her bipples down his legs to his ass, and the lips of her mouth are sticky, gooing cum each time she removes her suction tight grip on his cock to mumble to herself more demands from his cock will await her.

Fuck, Id love to write this chapter lol!

I started reading this story around 2000 on eroticstories.com. 18 years later and my son is closer to being old enough to read this than I am to being back at the age I was when this epic started. Jack, you rock this is the best story on the internet. Is there any chance you can just let your audience know what the state of this story is?

JackKing, thins has been an incredible story. I am hoping for a final chapter or two soon. If not, maybe pass it on and let someone with similar passions close it out.

That's a ridiculous idea. This is Jack's story and will continue when and if he wants to.

Please Jack throw us a bone and please give us an update! Please!

Are there any other stories on here like A Tempting Vacation? I need something to keep me going!

Please give us an update Jack, absolutely desperate for the next chapter

Hopefully your inspired to keep going with it soon!!

Been checking in often hoping to see Part 19. I'll keep checking. Love this story, hope you manage to finish it!

Here's to hoping you have the the next couple chapters ready to drop on us as a nice surprise.

Still hopeful we’ll get more chapters. This is absolutely my favorite series on the site.

So desperate for the next chapter!

Please drop the next chapter on us. Teasing is what it is all about but don't teas us any more!

Can't wait to read next chapter

Please don't let this be the end! It's been nearly 2 years, I hope something hasn't happened to Jack, I check back here almost daily for the next instalment and I'm worried that it's all over! Give us a sign Jack that you're still planning to add to this wonderful series! Please!

I’m guessing that Chapter 19 will be posted on October 11, 2018.

Anytime will do, just wish Jack would give us an update or let us know if he's still writing. Please Jack give us a sign!

Starting to think that it's all over :(

Jackking, the George R.R. Martin/Patrick Rothfuss of Literotica

Jack,

Are you dead? Have you quit? Did your wife discover your hobby and prohibit you from continuing?

After all it’s taken him almost 20 years to get them together.

2 years now and counting :(

A two year gap doesn't mean it's over, he's done that (and more) plenty of times before. That said,really hope it's soon.

Cant wait for chapter 19! I bet it will be amazing! Hopefully not to far away!

Pls

If the next chapter doesn’t come soon I might die

PLEASE JACK! JUST AN UPDATE WILL DO! JUST SO WE KNOW! PLEASE!