All Comments on 'A Thanksgiving to Remember'

Such a beautiful story and you paint a very nice picture of all that is going on. Keep up the good work, you have the talent. I love reading a story like this written from a woman's perspective because most of the stories of this nature seemed to be written by men and from their perspective. Myself included

I agree with the other posted here, I like when girls write stories about girls. Men may try, and some do a decent job, but there is nothing like a girl writing about her feelings! Abd who knows more about girl's feelings, than a girl? Especially in a lesbian type story or stiuation, girls know girls bodies better than we men do!! But I sure do love a girls body!! From head to toes!!

In reading your story I could literally put myself right there in the room with the four of you. It was real enough that I was sitting here with a big hard on. Keep up the great work.

Let's hear some real sign from the characters that they're actually engaged in hot sex. "Eat me, Katie! God, I love your sweet tongue on my clit!" Not constant, implausible (and impossible while breathing hard) repetitions of "FUCK" ad infinitum, instead of dialogue, but a few words here and there to keep the reader's attention

And, please, don't call a cunt a twat (or a quim or a slit, etc.). Call it what it is—a cunt. "Pussy" is lame, "vagina" belongs in medical books. We're talking sex, here.

Love ya, Kid.

Rose in Sacramento