All Comments on 'A Trip to a Clothing Optional Beach'

Very hot, but too short! Please write a second chapter.

Great first story! The image of a woman rowed to shore, by a bevy of naked men locked in chastity, is very striking. And so is her handing out chastity cages to all the men on the beach.

One suggestion, though. At times, this story feels like its supposed to be the real world. And at others, some sort of fantasy world (with a femdom twist) - an impression helped by the repeated use of the word "pirate". In the future, you might want to keep an eye on conveying a consistent feel.

Still a really great story, though. And I look forward to more. Good luck!