All Comments on 'A Trip to the Booths'

Good first attempt. Keep going. Maybe set the scene a lil more and give more details of the action.

Well written . Flowed well and kept my attention. Can't wait to read of the next adventure

I loved your story and the genre, good job!

I loved this little story. I wasn't wild about how bossy, controlling and forceful the husband is but than again, this story is EMBARASSINGLY close to what I used to put my wife through before the internet and children. Not long ago my wife and I were talking about the stuff we USED to do and I was pleasantly surprised to learn, that she was glad I push her boundaries. Even the stuff she hated, at the time, looking back, she is glad they happened and is interested in us doing more

Great story, loved it! Please write more!