All Comments on 'A Trip to the Mall'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Confused

You used was when describing Brandon. Is he dead? How did you get arms out of bra with hands roped above head without cutting it?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Plot Hole

Wouldn't Brandon be aware that the child isn't his... when it is half black?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Derek, Derek...

I did a shot whenever I read the word "Derek" and now I am dead from alcohol poisoning. Adjectives like "He" are too mainstream.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

please continue.

Did you get pregnant ? If so When the baby came out was it black ? What happen then., ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Terrible bad interracial rape fantasy. The only positive aspect is the lack of talent and a ridiculous dose of infantilism .

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26 Years old, Looking to share some stories about what happened in my life.