All Comments on 'A Vampire's Human Slave Ch. 03'

by MasochisticFreak

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Stupid. He had so many bindings and you didn't mention them. Like the leash on his genitals and throat. Tape on each ankle, mouth, other hand. You have to remember to say what was taken off or you confuse the reader.!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very good.

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