All Comments on 'A Virgin's Tale Ch. 02'

I think this is a good premise and plot but I think you need to flush out your characters' personalities a bit more. At times they read like horny college kids than professional adults. I think if you want to make this a sustainable series you might want to go more in depth than the unsure virgin and the hot dominant alpha male wanting sex especially given their complications already with his son being in the middle of the two.

I like it the way it is. The characters are realateable (sp?). Who says horny giddiness is only for college kids? I also love the little boy!!! Adorable!! I really hope he gets a nice,new mommy!! ;-)

I do take comments very seriously. When you give me advice or input, I often incorporate it into my next chapters. So please keep the comments rolling. I love knowing what my readers want.

1st chapter was a Lil rough but 2nd one is getting better. Keep going and don't let those haters of people stop you from writing... keep up the good work and make it a little longer than 1 page

More please, haha!

Thanks for sharing your talent looking forward to chapter 3.

Please, please more chapters