All Comments on 'A Visit from a Goddess'

It's always a pleasure to run across a "unique" story on here. I really enjoyed this, and thank you for sharing. It's a good "stand-alone", but you could develop another chapter about where he goes from here.

Thanks again,

Bob.

Unique is a good word, but this is terribly short and lacking suspense, definition and character. It's a five minute wet dream.

Just a few words vomited out and typed into a computer as fast as bleach could disinfect the place.

Harsh? Not really as this was not a story by definition. At best and I mean at absolute best on the best of days it could be considered the idle musings of a bewildered person.