All Comments on 'A Walk in the Woods'

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The_WatermanThe_Watermanalmost 6 years ago
A nice little story.

I feel this could have been better for me if I knew who the characters were. I like the action and what he did to get her off, but I would like to know the why of her servitude, the depth of his Domination and how they got to this place. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Waterman, younaled i

Waterman, you Nailed it.

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