All Comments on 'A Weekend at the Cabin Ch. 06'

This is a lovely romantic story, with plot and romantic scenes nicely balanced, but it needs to be finished! Where is the next chapter? How does the story end? It is a shame that this story has been left unfinished. Regrettable too is the author's decision to use second person present tense to tell the story. Proper story telling should really use the past tense (which is how people really narrate stories), and first or third tense would have been better for this story, which is really quite well done otherwise.