All Comments on 'A White Tiger and The Wolf Ch. 09'
by bearmad1963
- 14 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoplease dont make us wait so long for the next chapter... other wise seems pretty good.
donaldeabout 13 years agowhat a spectacular tremendous chapter throughly enjoyed every line of it and can not wait for the next chapter. You really out did yourself on this chapter
Mermaid2189about 13 years agohopefuly we dont gave to wait soo long for the next chapter. awesome chapter though
ananduabout 13 years agoDon't let us wait to long for the next chapter. Send you a direct feedback as well.
shortydeeabout 13 years agoI am so happy that you got her family together. The party was a wonderful touch. I will be looking for more.
Silkydarktereasaabout 13 years agoThis is a very good story. You are developing the story nicely. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.....
canndabout 13 years agoI enjoyed this chapter. My only complaint would be that I thought the 'plan' of Lazlo's that John took from his head was kind of anticlimactic. You had said in the previous chapter that he wanted to start a war and that he wanted Kay's awesome powers to do so. The only new info was that he wanted to use Paul's power instead of just luring Kay by kidnapping him. Other than that, I enjoyed the races and getting to know some pack members. It was a beautiful proposal though I'm suprised she didn't tell her parents as soon as she saw them that she was engaged. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI absolutly loved this story and can't wait for the next ones=) Love Carrie from Sweden
VoluptuousValkyrieabout 12 years ago1 ½ feet tall and 5 ½ feet wide isquite large to put on a dressing table, like as wide as a 14 year old is tall!
Wonder means to think about or ponder WANDER is to roam, explore or meander
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYou mentioned several times, "Thanks for the help," but you've not gotten any, nor have you changed your terrible and shameful writing style of ignorance.
bearmad1963over 8 years agoAuthorI have been told by a few of my readers that my work is been copied and used in other stories.
I have now transferred all of my story to wattpad. I'm sick of people copying my story and using it.
My watt pad name is bearmad50 this is the link for you.
https://www.wattpad.com/user/bearmad50
I have posted chapters 1 - 14 on that sight. Please come and check it out. I will no longer be posing this story here. Bye thanks for all your support over the years. From Kay.
bearmad1963over 8 years agoAuthorMy new wattpad name is bearmad50kayclarke. Come and join me
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