by BrettJ
The ' nitty gritty ' isn't there. I wanted to be there for Micheal's losing poker hand. I wanted to read his reaction when he found out his wife's renewed career vector. Would they still make it.
Maybe we don't all have first hand knowledge of gambling addiction and sleazy sub-world of high end nightclubs. Too bad. This story is a fail for any one who's viewed " Soprano's" compendium. No excuse for missing that. ***'s for " initial effort.
What a pathetic couple. He's a scumbag low-life who would sell out his wife to what he thinks are hardcore thugs, and she's a filthy whore who will sleep with anyone to save a marriage unworth saving.
I really liked this story too! loved the fact that she went back into business to save her husband.
Husband pimps are pretty common. The marriage is convenient for them, more a safe place for her and a domestic for him. She's willing to whore to keep the arrangement and he has no jealosy because he feels no love. The money's good, that's all. Writing feelings into the story comes across as unreal.
You submitted this story two years ago, and I remember reading it. Why not add another few chapters and tell us what Linda is up to, did her hubby ever find out about
her whoring ways, and did she ever get the debt and second mortgage paid off?
Good story. You make it realistic. So many story are not believable.
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Interesting story. I congratulate you on your imagination! You have a lot going on here. Everything so far sex wise has been more of a narrative,but you are still building your characters and providing needed background. Looking forward to the development of chapter two.