All Comments on 'A Wife Plus Two Makes Music'

And keep it there

i liked the story right to where u cut out the way they had there threesome so im not voting until u fix the ending lol\

Why would anybody bother to write this crap and i see peteswick favorite it what a loser he must be.

And no don't write anymore stories or if you do put it in the FETISH section where they belong. Encouraging someone to give up any vows they made and to fuck around is NOT erotic in any possible way, and to condone such behaviour is really stupid, even for swingers.

My first submission. I guess I got the category wrong. Also there's a sequel draft in the works. I should have waited until both were done.

To the anons: no guts huh? You try writing and possibly dropping your vanity veil. Pussy.

he'll spank.

... you do need a good Editor, don't you!

And a Proof-Reader!

Gives it 10 stars