All Comments on 'A Witch's Curse Ch. 01'

How does someone get pregnant from busting in her ass ?

So the punishment is females want to have sex with this guy and won’t take no for an answer. Wow, must be tough. “Oh no, don’t have sex with me. Whatever will I do?” How the fuck is this a punishment?

The witch said, "anyone" attracted to males will want him. Wake up guys, that includes MEN that are attracted to men. As well as women. This proves raging hormones makes you stupid.

for a minute there, I thought the curse was going to be changed into a woman. chapter 2 soon?

This would be a very good opening chapter for a great many varied stories. This is an excellent example of a story contest beginning where one takes the story premise in ones own artistic direction. My first thought reading this story was to find results to such a contest.... is that the results of such a story contest would be erotica ecstatics; representing my preferences in certain stories while representing others preferences within other stories. It can be fun to venture into the unknown.

Loving this: "Lucy... Don't make me impregnate you. At least put a condom on."

Why be concerned about pregnancy if he came in her ass ?

The idea is not bad, but the execution needs work. Why 'look' worried if he's alone, wouldn't he BE worried. And pick a perspective. Is this a flashback and he knows the future already, or is this in the present?