All Comments on 'A Work Mate's Girlfriend's Feet'

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TwilekloverTwilekloveralmost 8 years ago
Great Story!

Absolutely loved the slow build and the great feet scene at the end! If you want some constructive feedback I'd recommend a little more checks for grammar and punctuation, but that's secondary to a lovely story! Please keep writing!

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