All Comments on 'Abducted by Alien Androids'

Interesting but way too short of a start! More please.

definitely too short didn't even leave me wanting more or wondering what next

I really think you need a proofreader.

Don't take this the wrong way, but that was just about as bad as I thought it would be. And that's a good thing. I'm a fan of cheesy science fiction B-movies, and this read like a late-80's porn parody of the genre, so it's fun in that sense. I do agree that you need a proofreader, and that this effort was a bit too short, but keep working at it.

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What you would call repetative.

First and foremost, you need an editor. Or at least to go through and read it again yourself before posting. Jack asked "What do you mean cybernetic implants" when the aliens hadn't mentioned anything of the sort. I had to stop there, even though u realised there's barely a page here.