All Comments on 'Acacia'
by boxwoodsub
- 7 Comments
estragonabout 13 years agoBarring a few quibbles, which I will send via "Send Feedback". Adult, eschewing cliches. Good start--keep writing!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI hope you will find time to continue this - I enjoyed it immensely
bullfinchalmost 13 years agoYour writing is literate and original with subtle tones. More please.
slave2womanalmost 13 years agoReally enjoyed this story, good plot, simple readable sentences.
What you write is what i see ! That's how stotty should be written
sammy_ualmost 13 years agoIt was just superb ... the control exercised was simply out of the world. I doubt if there are women of this character?
Anonymousover 12 years agoAn outstanding story. I wonder if there really could be a woman like Acacia to give myself to.
manysinnzabout 4 years agoThis is an outstanding story. The verbal byplay between Acacia and the sub at the party was a beautiful dom/sub seduction and was a genuine pleasure to read. I am surprised there are not more comments. I think a lot of people expect a mechanically elaborate scene, the kind that Acacia was pointedly trying to avoid. Great work!. Please continue it.
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